Monday, August 16, 2010
Drama Dabblers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 10, August 13th
You can check out our videos in a separate post.
Author Adventures, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 10, August 13th
Digital Storytelling -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 10, August 13th
Our digital stories are about:
Kayaking -- Amy
Dance -- Amanda
Educational fitness program -- Kevin
Getting lost in the woods -- Bao
Making eggrolls -- Don
Soccer -- Bell
A scary night -- Shelby
Vietnamese New Year -- Jonathan
Geocaching -- Mrs. Bragg
Look for the digital stories to be posted on the Lehigh Valley Writing Project Camp's website, http://www.lvwp.org.camps/
Thanks, Amy Y., for writing this post.
Saturday, August 14, 2010
Wanna Be Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 9, August 12th
We heightened our senses by taking a smell of the "jar" then finding uncommon uses for a large alligator clip. Everyone practiced reading their piece for tomorrow's presentation, and worked to finish our horror mysteries to share in the response group. Finally we did a writing activity looking back at ourselves or fast forwarding our lives.
Friday, August 13, 2010
College-Bound -- Session 2 -- Center Valley, Days 7, 8,9
Campers in the spotlight and what they wrote about today:
1. Eric wrote about risks
2. Walter wrote about being an individual
Wednesday's post, authored by Rosalie: We warmed up by free-writing about a quote that meant something to us. We then prepared for the writing portion of the SAT by taking a 25 minute practice test. Finally, we had a long period of free time to write and polish our pieces. At the end of class, we all shared an excerpt from our works.
Campers in the spotlight and what they wrote about today:
1.. Eric used vivid detail to describe his unique dog.
2. Kailea made us laugh with her story about eavesdropping on neighbors.
3. Gabby shared some interesting thoughts on being inspired by the lake.
Tuesday's post, authored by Kailea: Today we focused a great deal on SAT practice. Ms. Harlen gave us an essay scoring guide that told us how the SAT writing essays are scored. We used this guide to grade essays that were written for the SAT. Surprisingly, most of us were wrong about what each essay scored, which just gave us an idea of what to expect when we took the SATs. Later, Mr. Guffrovich from Admissions at Penn State Lehigh Valley came to give us advice on our numerous college questions.
Campers in the spotlight and what they wrote about today:
1. Emily asked Mr. Guffrovich an excellent question about how much the SATs counted towards applying to college: Answer-1/3
2. Gabi, Nikki and Abby’s group got the most correct on grading the SAT writing essays
3. Shelby made a fine statement about how we need to be aware of what we find as a good essay the people grading the SATs might think otherwise; we need to be aware of our readers
Science Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 9, August 12th
We learned golden rod paper is an indicator, which turns golden paper pink when you write on it with soap. Soap is a base.
This post was written by Science Writer, Eme.
Thursday, August 12, 2010
Creative Composers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- August 12th
One night I saw a UFO. An alien came out with a bow and arrow. He shot down all the pretty flowers and all that was left were weeds! With a magic key, he made new flowers because at first he didn't like flowers, but he had changed his mind. I was so freaked out tht I called 911 with my new cellphone. when the alien saw the police care, he teleported to Egypt. The police chased all the aliens and they landed by parachute. Then the aliens, who saw the police chasing them, ran to their spaceship and zipped out of planet Earth. When they were in their spaceship, they ate three apples. Just then, their burritos caught on fire (they had overheated in the oven powered by milk). Four beetles, which were on the spaceship, survived and hurtled back toward Earth, found some mini-guitars and a min-drum, and they became the Beatles!
Wednesday, August 11, 2010
Comic Strip Creations -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 8, August 11th
Remember everyone --
At 3:15 on Friday, all the parents can come and check out our final comics and other art.
Bye-Bye. : )
By Catherine
Neil typed this
Drama Dabblers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 8, August 11th
We campers wrote Character Resumes and many of us typed them in the computer lab. We continued practicing for Friday's play. We even made a set piece -- a brick house!
* Tanya typed her mystery play.
* Eliza started to type her play, "The Mystery of the Lost Thumb Drive."
*Neil wrote his resume for the play -- his character's name is Bob.
Digital Storytelling -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 8, August 11th
What do campers like about making digital stories?
It's not graded -- Amanda
We get to use the computer -- Don
This blog post was authored by Johnathan and Don.
Science Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 8, August 11th
It’s not as easy as you think to make a perfect airplane. In the first contest Eme won the contest based on height and distance. In the second contest the person who won for appearance was Luan. The person who won the shortest turned out to be a tie but then they did a second run and it turned out to be Haley. The airplane flying the farthest was Eme again. Now for the technique contest. This time, Haley won. Now they are finishing with the gentlest flight contest.
This post was authored by Kelley and Ruby.
Creative Composers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 8, August 11th
The anthologies will be published in the fall. We prepared by practicing peer editing in a new way that was fun. Later, we went into the computer lab to edit and revise and to finish our pieces that we chose for the anthology that will be published in the fall.
We worked hard today, but we are just about ready!
EXHIBITION FOR FRIENDS AND FAMILY
Please join us this Friday, August 13th at 11:15 a.m. for some light refreshments and a joyous celebration of the young writers' work!
Author Adventures, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 8, August 11th
Deetya, Ethan, and Kate really liked fairy tales today.
Neil and Tanya favored storytime.
Tuesday, August 10, 2010
Creative Composers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 7, August 10th
We also explored favorite author websites because they offer tips to help us become better writers. On one site, we saw how they turned a book into a movie. (We also liked the book trailers!)
We chose pieces for publishing for the anthology and worked in the computer lab.
EXHIBITION FOR FRIENDS AND FAMILY
Please join us this Friday, August 13th at 11:15 a.m. for some light refreshments and a joyous celebration of the young writers' work!
Drama Dabblers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 7, August 10th
This post was written by Kyle.
Comic Strip Creations -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 7, August 10th
We learned that panels are a HUGE part in drawing and creating comics. The class got to read comics to see how the person designed each panel, but I just enjoyed reading the different types of comics.
This post was authored by Liem.
Digital Storytelling -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 7, August 10th
Today we wrote in our journals about our favorite holidays and what our families do to celebrate them. Then we did an activity to help make our stories more descriptive.
Amanda finished her story.
Amy found pictures for her second story.
Shelby found more pictures for her story, too.
Geocaching...
Author Adventures, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 7, August 10th
Ethan and Elizabeth G. name typing as their favorite part of the day.
Kate, Deetya, and Victoria liked writing letters.
Wanna Be Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 7, August 10th
Ideas contributed by Brett.
Parents are invited to join us this Friday at 11:00 for a Listening Cafe as writers read a favorite piece to an audience.
Science Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 7, August 10th
-- Haley aka Smiley
Monday, August 9, 2010
Comic Strip Creations -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 6, August 9th
Written by Jessica P., with some help from Kevin…
Digital Storytelling -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 6, August 9th
Today we wrote in our journals about what will happen in 2035. Then we talked about what good stories have and what good storytellers do. After that, we worked on our digital stories.
Good stories...
have humor, suspense, and draw you in!
Good storytellers...
don't say "Uh" or "um." They tell a story that their audience wants to listen to, they practice, make eye contact, use clear voices, tell stories with emphasis and expression, and add lots of detail.
CELEBRATE OUR STORIES CREATED DURING THE PENN STATE LVWP YOUTH WRITING CAMP!
Where: Penn State -- Lehigh Valley, Center Valley
When: August 13th, 2010 at 2:30 p.m.
Please RSVP: Donna Bragg, Instructor
All digital stories will be posted on www.lvwp.org at the conclusion of camp.
Drama Dabblers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 6, August 9th
Derek worked in the lab on his own Mad Lib.
Maya typed her A-Z tongue twisters.
Kyle continued writing about Godzilla.
This post was written by dazzling Drama Dabbler, Eliza.
Wanna Be Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 6 -- August 9th
This blog post was written by Jasmine.
Science Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 6, August 9th
This post was authored by Allstar aka Giggles.
REMINDER: WEAR OLD CLOTHES TOMORROW FOR TIE-DYE TUESDAY!
Author Adventures, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 6, August 9th
Rhea and Lucy loved typing their writing.
Rahul and Maya say that their favorite time was writing their "How to" paragraph.
Creative Composers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 6, August 9th
EXHIBITION FOR FRIENDS AND FAMILY
Please join us this Friday, August 13th at 11:15 a.m. for some light refreshments and a joyous celebration of the young writers' work!
Friday, August 6, 2010
Drama Dabblers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 5, August 6th
This was written by Maya.
Digital Storytelling -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 5, August 6th
Today we wrote in our journals about something that is special. Then, we worked on recording and finding music to go with our digital stories.
Today's highlights...
Jonathan wrote about his baby sister.
Shelby recorded her story.
Bell worked on finding more pictures about Cristiano Ronaldo.
Wanna' Be Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 5, August 6th
Rachael wrote about a successful guitar solo.
Alex showed the tension of a chess match.
Gianna relived a winning soccer moment.
Science Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 5, August 6th
The last step was that we could decorate our ice cream with toppings and enjoy it and have a great day at camp. Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This post was written by the author named Aman.
OVER THE WEEKEND : EXPERIMENT WITH THE YELLOW PAPER AND IDENTIFY WHAT IS SPECIAL ABOUT IT.
Creative Composers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 5, August 6th
This post was collaboratively authored by Sahil and Peter.
Here is the story we wrote together and this is how it was done. Each of us thought up a word, wrote it down without showing it to anyone. We used the word in a sentence when the notebook was passed to us and that's when we could read what was written as a story so far. Here it is...
I was in the middle of eating some Swiss cheese when someone knocked on the door. It was an archer! It was so surprising! The archer was 99 years old and he was ancient. He was so hairy that if you shaved his hair, you could make a fuzzy sweater. His nose hair was very messy and that wasn't very nice. So, whenever he went swimming, he had to use a hair tie. He said to me "Please give whatever you can to whoever you can tomorrow and you will be rewarded." Then, he turned around and disappeared into thin air. Suddenly, Alexandra's true love showed up! It was like slow motion and then he tripped but jumped back up. So he decided to take a nap because he was very tired from all of that. When he woke up, he saw Alexandra in front of him. She asked him "Are you hungry?" He nodded, so she gave him some cheese. After he ate, he thanked her and after talking for awhile, he left for home. Then she chose some more cheese. This time she chose the AWESOME cheese. Suddenly she turned even more awesome and got together with her true love. They lived happily ever after.
Thursday, August 5, 2010
Drama Dabblers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 4, August 5th
Elijah came up with the ideas for this blog (and personally delivered it).
Kyle wrote a play about Godzilla saving the people of New York.
Maya finished her collaborative play.
Wanna Be Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 4, August 5th
Today we went outside to explore and write about a little part of the outdoors…2ft x 2ft! Then we described a mythical beast for Beastly Thrilling Thursday and a partner illustrated it. Lastly, we made a 3-dimensional character using a 2-liter bottle and tomorrow we will write the character bio.
Way to go campers!
Digital Storytelling -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 4, August 5th
We all worked together to create a funny story about a pizza guy named Luigi. After that, we all worked on our digital stories.
* Don downloaded pictures for Movie Maker.
* Kevin recorded his story.
* Amy put pictures on Movie Maker.
Here is our cooperative story...
Once upon a time there was a really, really small Italian dude named Luigi who made the best pizzas in the world. The key ingredient in the pizza was apple! Luigi lived in a small teepee behind the shop. It took a really long time for his pizzas to cook, which was good because he then had time to walk his pet turtle. The turtle's collar was beautiful with eight pointed arrows on it. Many people came to eat his pizzas and see his magic show with his pet turtle.
(That's creative!)
Science Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 4, August 5th
We had our bridge contest. Believe or not everyone won!. Some things we learned about building were that triangular beams are the strongest for a bridge.
TOMORROW WE NEED GLOVES OR TOWELS SO WE DON'T GET FROSTBITE FROM MAKING ICE CREAM!
--This post was authored by Sam.
Comic Strip Creations -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 4, August 5th
Well, today was the first day in the computer lab. We were working on typing stories for our big comic project. We also made "flip books" out of post-it notes. We also showed each other our flip books. In the beginning of class, we drew a "brainstorm". Also in the beginning of class, in our writer's notebooks, we had to write a fairy tale BACKWARDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not easy.
Well bubs, my work here is done. Bye!
~This blog was written by William M.
Creative Composers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 4, August 5th
Today we journaled about where we would go-- real or imaginary-- and what we'd take, who we'd bring along, and WHY.
Before it got hot, we went outside to share, peer edit, and discuss. (We had to be careful our papers didn't blow away with the wind!) This helped us brainstorm even more ideas for our writing. We talked about details and strong words and added them to our writing.
We went out again later to enjoy our snack outside and then came in to work in the computer lab to type what we wrote today and work on other pieces.
Ideas included;
cheese, flying trampolines, collecting different currencies, going to Boston, sisters, brothers, double-decker buses, and so much more!
Each camper worked on goals they wrote for the day.
Author Adventures -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 4, August 5th
Highlights of the day:
Lucy and Derek -- typing their stories.
Neil and Elizabeth -- writing the rules.
College-Bound -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 4, August 5th
Today we started off with an unusual story telling activity using Silly Bands as characters in a story. We then went outside for activities of visualization (tableaus, actions, gestures, etc). We followed this up with a sort of frame-by-frame scene, acting with partners where we had to walk, wait, watch, wave and walk. The audience had to guess what we were doing. We continued to write about talk about what we believe. We finally finished out with free writing and sharing what we believe.
Campers in the spotlight and what they wrote about today:
* Nikki and Rosalie went to the movies for their scene acting.
*Shelby had an unusual experience being attacked by the local wildlife.
*Emily shared some of her personal beliefs about physics class.
Wednesday, August 4, 2010
Creative Composers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 3, August 4th
Today campers explored concrete poems -- each camper thought of a topic, brainstormed words related to the topic, and then shaped a poem using those words. Each piece is a treasure!
We worked on cinquains and reviewed parts of speech and word choice. Campers are beginning to think about publishing for the anthology, which will surface in the fall.
We enjoyed working in the computer lab and sharing our ideas and pieces with our fellow campers.
Wanna Be Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley
This post was authored by Zhuohong. Well done, camper!
Comic Strip Creations -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 3, August 4th
Today in Comic Strip Creations we talked about backgrounds, positioning, emotions, and emphasis. We also talked about making our own narrative comics. In the process of brainstorming, there was a point where the whiteboard was covered in purple, yellow, and blue sticky notes with story ideas. we also started to make up our own comics.
Neil, an excellent speller, typed this (in extended). Thanks, Neil.
HOMEWORK:
- TONIGHT -- CHOOSE A MEMORY FOR YOUR NARRATIVE COMIC STRIP.
- BRING IN GLOVES OR A DISHTOWEL FOR FRIDAY.
Digital Storytelling -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 3, August 4th
Today we read our stories to our partners. We gave advice to each other on how to improve them. Then, we all logged on the computer to work on our digital stories.
Highlights of the day:
Jonathan wrote about getting on television for making Christmas ornaments.
Bao wrote about the beach.
Amanda wrote about dance.
Drama Dabblers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 3, August 4th
Tomorrow, campers will switch directions and try to draw their partner's Wild Thing.
Neil wrote this blog today.
Derek typed his collaborative play.
Rhea worked on typing her Wild Thing directions.
College-Bound -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 3, August 4th
First, we read some of Ms. Harlen’s quotes about friendship, and became inspired to find our own favorite quotes online. We each made a poster with our favorite quotes on it, which led to a discussion about what we each believe. We found out more about each other in a group, but had personal realizations as well.
Campers in the spotlight and what they wrote about today:
Emily firmy knew where she stood when we were discussing our beliefs.
Nikki told us about some of her personal and religious beliefs.
Shelby made some convincing arguments when we were discussing whether killing a human was right or wrong.
Science Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 3, August 4th
As usual at PSU camp we are science writers in room 316. Today we were bridge builders. First, we researched in the lab and the computer bridge animation. Then we came to the classroom and built bridges using construction paper, fettuccine, masking tape, markers, crayons, and our minds and what we remember from researching in the lab where we found what shapes hold the most. Then we came up with different categories such as most complicated, strongest, and most creative. We also came up with how wide and tall he bridge has to be. Different groups made completely different bridges. Different teams ran into different problems like it doesn’t hold much or not high enough.
Today's post was authored by Ruby. Well done!
Author Adventures -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 3, August 4th
Class highlights for today:
Victoria and Elizabeth U. chose the CRASH! BOOM! SMASH! story as the highlight of the day!
Nandini, Kate, and Maya liked making their ads.
Drama Dabblers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 2, August 3rd
Tanya finished writing her Minute Monologue.
Neil started his collaborative play and finished.
Rhea finished her monologue and started her collaborative play.
Creative Composers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 2, August 3rd
We read a book about a very young boy who helps a very old woman find her memories. We considered how feelings are attached to memories and how these influence our writing. We journaled about our own memories -- and everyone loved those fortune cookie prompts!
Digital Storytelling -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 2, August 3rd
Campers in the spotlight today are...
Amy, who is writing about her adventures with her cousins.
Bell, who is writing about new school experiences.
Jonathan, who is writing about yesterday's fiasco.
Shelby, who is writing about Rhode Island and Massachusetts.
Comic Strip Creations -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 2, August 3rd
Today we talked about the language of comics, including panels, words, and symbols! We got our mission, which is to create a narrative comic strip based on one of our memories or experiences. And, of course, we continue to read and discuss the types of comics.
And we DRAW, DRAW, DRAW and WRITE, WRITE, WRITE!
Author Adventures -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 2, August 3rd
Derek and Rhea liked typing on the computer.
Nandini, Elizabeth U., and Maya chose writing their legend as their favorite part.
College-Bound -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 2, August 3rd
minds. After exercising our brains, we exercised our bodies with
entertaining improv games. We ended the day by writing about our favorite places and people.
Campers in the spotlight and what they wrote about today:
Gabby wrote about what makes her who she is now in her personal poem.
Emily wrote about the firehouse where she spent a lot of her childhood.
Walter wrote about a childhood hotspot for him- Huntington Beach.
Creative Composers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 1, August 2nd
Science Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 1, August 2nd
Aman -- "Interesting, wish we could do it again tomorrow. It was fun!"
Allie -- Writing a story about yellow pigment coming from black marker.
Ruby --Asked "How many different colors in the marker?" Gray had several colors.
Sam-- Made colors explode.
Eme-- "It is so much fun!" She experimented with dye and separated it and made a really cool design.
Haley --"Really fun!"
And more (like silliness with purple cabbage)!
Comic Strip Creations -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 1, August 2nd
Drama Dabblers, Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 1, August 2nd
College-Bound -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 1, August 2nd
This post was authored by Emily.
Wanna Be Writers -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 1, August 2nd
some of these ideas were written by: Callie
Monday, August 2, 2010
Digital Storytelling -- Session 2 -- Center Valley -- Day 1, August 2nd
Highlights for today...
We sat and wrote and watched amazing video on ways to write.
Campers in the spotlight today and what they wrote about...
Amanda wrote about school memories.
Kevin wrote about guitar stuff.
Bao wrote about soccer.
Drama Writers -- Southern Lehigh Middle School -- Days 8-10, July 28-30
Allie always made sure her characters had at least one line to get a laugh from the audience.
Brooke developed her look of shock over the two weeks and became quite an expert at this facial expression.
Alex took on the role of a doctor but also endured being dragged across the stage as a dead corpse.
Naomi liked to improvise and add her own flair to the written script and her characters were very well-dressed.
Olivia looked and acted very professional in her roles, but in the end, was charged with a horrible crime.
Thank you campers for a wonderful two weeks! We hope to see you next summer!