Today we journaled and shared our favorite writing pieces. We also explored dialgue and poetry. We worked on editing and revising our work using the computer.
Ben's "Star Man" reminded us that the words "to be continued..." can be quite a cliffhanger! Great use of dialogue, Ben!
Sandhya's "Pets That I Want" not only demonstrated her love of animals, but also her creative use of numbers within her poetry.
10 hamsters...
9 cats....
8 dogs...
7 guinea pigs...
Well done, Sandhya!
Dana brought in a piece that she wrote during the school year. Her story was about a girl named Molly who fell into a ditch in the park. In the ditch she found a dog -- a Collie-- that she could keep forever. Your heart was in that piece, Dana!
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